Enjoyable Running Experience at a Famous Park

I ran for 10km at a park, which is famous for jogging. This park is used for an international marathon game. There is a 2km running road at this park. The running road is very comfortable for running because the road is wide and made up of rubber, this makes damage to my leg reduced.  Many people are running, and this makes me cheer up. Recently, my knee  is in good condition, and I enjoyed running today.    

 

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I ran 10 kilometers at a park that is famous for jogging. This park is used for international marathon events. There is a 2-kilometer running track in the park. The track is very comfortable for running because it is wide and made of rubber, which reduces the impact on my legs. Many people were running, and their presence cheered me up. Recently, my knee has been in good condition, and I enjoyed running today.