I do part time jobs irregurally in some work places. Occasionally, this month there were 4 day within a week. I tried not to use highway to save money. All of the workplace is very far from my house, and so I drived for a long time , about 2hours. I like to drive my car, but many driving made me tired. My hip and waist hurt gradually. I want a cushion , which makes me feel comfortable on my hip.
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I do part-time jobs irregularly at various workplaces. Occasionally, this month, there were four days within a week. I tried not to use the highway to save money. All of the workplaces are very far from my house, so I drove for a long time, about two hours. I like driving my car, but driving a lot made me tired. My hip and waist gradually started to hurt. I want a cushion that makes my hip feel comfortable.
