I did part time job yesterday. The work pIace was so far from my house, and it took 2 hours by car. The part time job wasn't so hard for me. After I went back home, I walked for 30minutes with my daughter. She is 6-month old. Her feeling sometimes was not good in walking , but yesterday she kept calm during our walking. I tried to lose my weight by making a habit of walking with my daughter.
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I did part time job yesterday.
→I did my part time job yesterday.
The work pIace was so far from my house, and it took 2 hours by car.
→Work is so far from my house, the commute takes 2 hours by car.
The part time job wasn't so hard for me.
→The job wasn't so hard for me
After I went back home, I walked for 30minutes with my daughter.
After I came back home, I walked for 30 minutes with my daughter.
She is 6-month old.
She is 6 months old.
Her feeling sometimes was not good in walking , but yesterday she kept calm during our walking.
She is sometimes cranky while walking , but yesterday she kept calm.
I tried to lose my weight by making a habit of walking with my daughter.
I tried to lose weight by making a habit of walking with my daughter.
