I joined in work place reunion. In the reunion, I gave a presentation about my job in front of audience which included my boss, and so I got nervous. I thought I gave a good presentation, and my boss evaluated my presentation. I met previous my boss, and I was happy.
In the reunion, awards ceremony for presentation was held. My presentation was not selected for prize. My colleague got a prize. He is a good friend, and his presentation was good.
After the meeting, I went out to eat Ramen with him and our common friend, he treated me.
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I attended a workplace reunion where I gave a presentation about my job in front of an audience that included my boss, which made me nervous. However, I believe I delivered a good presentation, and my boss provided feedback on it. Additionally, I had the chance to reconnect with my former boss, which made me happy.
During the reunion, an awards ceremony for presentations was held. Unfortunately, my presentation was not selected for a prize, but my colleague, who is also a good friend, received one for his excellent presentation.
After the event, my colleague, our mutual friend, and I went out to eat ramen, and my colleague treated us
