Friendship and Celebrations: A Night Out with Colleagues " Repayment of Crane"

I drunk with my colleague last night. We worked at the same place last year, but we are working at different department. All of them seemed be happy with new life. One of them got a new girlfriend, other will have a baby. We talked from light to heavy subjects. We drunked for 4hours, but I felt time passed away so fast . I went back home because of my daughter. Some of them went to another bar, and they drunk at 3 a.m

 

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drunk with my colleague last night.

was drinking with a colleague last night.

We worked at the same place last year, but we are working at different department.

We worked at the same place last year, but now we work in different departments.

All of them seemed be happy with new life.

One of them got a new girlfriend, other will have a baby.

One of them has a new girlfriend, while the other will have a baby.

We talked from light to heavy subjects.

We drunked for 4hours, but I felt time passed away so fast .

We drank for 4hours, yet it felt like time passed so quickly.

I went back home because of my daughter.

I went back (or you can use returned) home because of my daughter.

Some of them went to another bar, and they drunk at 3 a.m.

Some of them went to another bar, and they drank till 3 a.m.