I participated in a party for my boss getting a new post. It was held in Nakasu, and the place was so good because the building was centered on Japanese old culture. I had a chance to speech as a new stuff, I was so nervous. Many people joined this party , inculuding OB. After the party, some of the participants inculing my boss went out for drinking in another place. The next bar was famous for craft beer, and we get drunk by drinking a alot. Strawberry and banana falvor beer was not good tasty. Orion beer was easy to drink.
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I participated in a party to celebrate my boss's new position. It was held in Nakasu, and the venue was remarkable for its incorporation of Japanese traditional culture. As a new member of the team, I had the opportunity to deliver a speech, which made me quite nervous. The party was well-attended, with both current colleagues and former employees (OB) present.
After the formal event, some of us, including my boss, decided to continue the celebration at another venue for drinks. The next bar we went to was known for its selection of craft beer, and we indulged in quite a few drinks. However, some of the unique flavors like strawberry and banana didn't appeal to our tastes, while Orion beer proved to be quite enjoyable and easy to drink.
